I'll Hold My Breath To Hear You Breathe

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Your eyes take me into another dimension,

Where time's elapsed in its own suspension,

Where dreams that soar into the night sky,

Come true, as well as hopes that fly,

You hold me close, in ecstasy,

I hold my breath to hear you breathe,

I close my eyes in this sweet surrender,

I want you to hold me in your arms forever,

But the sweetness breaks we know what must be,

Still I'll wait for you to come back to me,

Through sleepless nights and lonely days,

I'll wait for you through all delays,

So when your done, come back to me,

I am yours interminably,

So when you hold me close, in ecstasy,

I'll hold my breath to hear you breathe.

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Wonderful!


Starward

David Richardson's picture

Ramina:
This poem has intense beautiful love and complete overwhelming desire for another. The words you chose to express your intense devotion for another is simply breathtaking for this poem is so rich with your mastery expressioness and beautiful chose of selected words. Ramina, thank you for sharing this masterpiece with me and have a very beautiful weekend.

Regards,
Dave Richardson
6/19/2003