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If Wishes were Fishes.
If wishes were fishes
I need a bigger net
because for as long as I'm fishing
I want all I can get
and no matter the journey
I'll keep myself afloat
with my rod and my anchor
and of course my paddle boat
the bait made from desires
winds awash through my hair
I'll close my eyes tightly
in sea waters fair
and swoop down this net
within the light breeze
and raise it, swelling
with all the wishes I please.
I really enjoyed your work here. I the like rhyming in this poem and the words you chose to rhyme let you play in the process.
It is a very clever poem indeed.
The words gave real juice to the rhythm of the piece. Wishes are a limitless topic and well the ocean is full of fishes too…
peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot