You Are My Poem

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Love

I tend to neglect you

on the regular

I constantly abuse you

using words to twist

and turn

my feelings

to manipulate the

outcome in my favor

you still stand by my side



even when I am snarred

in an aphasic state and

say things I know are wrong

sometimes out of frustration

I bruise you over and over until

parts of my hands turn blue



I often leave you for days

at a time with nothing to

say offering no excuse for

my actions



though you endure all of

my abuse and frustrations

our love is sustained

and mine for you grows

even stronger

you allow me to come back

again and again

you take it from me

again and again

for this I am in love with you

for your commitment to me

I will forever continue to

manipulate and create

new ways to present you

to the world

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Shanita Johnson's picture

Hello Raili

its been a while since I last read some of your pieces...this one took it to a new level...love your word usage in this one....

nita

strawberrylagoon's picture

Loved it!

Loved it!

Loved it!

This is truly how I feel about poetry. This reminds me of a piece I wrote called Dear Poem....Raila as always, I love your stuff!

Martina Meade's picture

RaiLa - DAMN, I think Soul said it best in her shout for this poem. This piece is just beautiful. You are a wonderful, soulful, caring man to be able to pour your heart onto the page like this. AMAZING. MUCH LOVE, always...Martina

Shanita Johnson's picture

You really out did your self with this one. Still can't find the words I want to use......

Ginger Wayne's picture

i like this piece.. clever.

Joy Williams's picture

You KNOW I am Lovin' this Joint'. This is my type of flow. You have captured the feelings and experiences of a true writer with this one. I find myself trying to choose a particular part to love the most in this poem, but I can't! From the first line to the last... is all Love.

I'm on your page now, and you're spittin' out joints faster than I can read them! You go Cuz! I must admit that I was waiting for you to post some new stuff... good lookin' out.

Tawanda Roberson's picture

BABY LUV...YOU'VE WRITTEN SOME HOT ASS SHIT...BUT THIS
THIS IS COMPLETE AND UTTER BLISS. MY SOUL SHEDS TEARS TO THESE WORDS...WITHOUT A DOUBT LOVELY.