My Beautiful Boys - Cinquain

Cinquain Poetry

You two

have become the

ultimate joy of my

life, I will love you forever

my sons

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Lasohnda Harris's picture

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet

Lola Margot's picture

Wow i say this is a 5-star poem. Being a parent too,
i can really well relate to this particular one.
Thumps up for this.

Rachel  Marie Tate's picture

This was a very touching and lovely piece, exactly describing how I feel towards the light of my life, my little son, my everything, my reason for being, my pride and joy. What a delight reading this. Through it's regulated amount of syllables you still manage to convey deep emotion and love...:-)