Fornication - Haiku

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Erotic Senryu

Fornication can

feel so damn good until guilt

joins the orgasm

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Donielle Johnson's picture

R! I am feelin' this senryu! I have missed reading your inspiring pieces. I am going to be adding new senryus to my site in the next few days. I have written over 50 new erotic ones!

Donielle
http://www.doniellemonique.com

Katherine Neitz's picture

this one made me laugh for some reason. I really like the way you write, no matter what you're writing. You asked what one of my poems was about. It's about pain that I felt when I was betrayed by a friend and lost trust in my husband. It took many months to regain trust and top heal pain. And during it, I just couldn't help but write it down. Ya know.
Kate :)

S74rw4rd's picture

Exactly so. Your Haiku is excellent, and an excellent observation on life.


Starward

strawberrylagoon's picture

Damn RaiLa you are layin it down w/ the haiku man!
This was awesome...

Ernest Bevans's picture

Great piece of writing, Poet
capturing a snapshot of the anti-climax.