Benevolent moonshine

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A horned crown undesired,

Connecting ethereal tendrils

Of telepathy thru the land,

Sweeps in shallow demands,

Itself but a bickering beast.

When the silver moon comes down

Soft and bright, unsheathing

Its benevolent beams of blue,

Will you partake the truth?

 
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patriciajj's picture

Imagery becomes a living

Imagery becomes a living thing in your blazing imagination. It comes crashing onto the page with astounding symbolism that can speak paragraphs in a few words and then somersault its way into my mind's eye, leaving me wondering: how did this just happen? What wizardry do you wield to conjure something that lives, plays, breathes and entrances like "ethereal tendrils"? 

 

Congratulations on this. 

 

 

 

 

 

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Wow!!! And again I say,

Wow!!! And again I say, WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!  You compress so much atmosphere effect in so few lines, and that is always a sign of very classic talent.  I apologize for having fallen behind in my reading, but I am glad to have read this today.  With every poem of yours that I have read in the past, and this one today, I am the more and more convinced that you are a Symbolist Poet of the highest accomplishment.  I was reading some of Mallarme, just last night, but I like this poem better.


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