Twisted toenails

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A sudden unexpected twist in time..
I resign from hope, not to hope again.
Everything we ever need will always
Present a promised detail in this deep 
Dreamland of prophecy and utopian
Rivers where drifting logs are songs
 
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The imagery is very

The imagery is very powerful.  The poem suggests a backstory or background, and only a very good Poet, like you, can achieve that kind of effect in six lines.  


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