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A View From My Soul
I love that picture...
You Know...
The one with the naked woman
looking from the bridge;
Nature and beauty surrounds her:
All she sees is...
vast blackness.
I love that picture...
You Know...
The one with the naked woman
looking from the bridge;
Nature and beauty surrounds her:
All she sees is...
vast blackness.
I can't say much because Bill hit it right on the head.
i love poems that are so short but rlly say something. I like it. alot ...
i love this poem ;*)
Dear Linda,
That was a great poem. Cheers.
Excellent
most marvelous masterpiece
thanks for sharing
salam
A real letter from the soul - I can realy relate to this poem!
Nicolette
She is that picture...the naked woman on the bridge...readying herself to jump...not seeing the hope and beauty in the world around here, only being able to see the blackness of hopelessness that is neverending for her. A very haunting piece...beautifully written.
Peace,
LadyHawke
i love this
beautifull poem :*)
I feel as though I have some personal relationship with this poem...Yet I am not the poetess in this case, I will say that poetry, when it is great enough will make us apart of itself...That is what you did with this piece, gave it a greatness which impacted me greatly..
Always,
Amberlee
a total letting go of inhibition and pretense... of the grasping view of self.... to the heart of all that breathes, and dances! very good poem eric
Yes, she sees the blackness because she is looking into her self. If she would only look outward into the light she would see paradise! She is a lot like the woman of your comments on Janice Joplin. She is a lonely, tortured soul that cannot see the light. Always forced to look more deeply within than she should. To dwell in the world of the unknown, because she was tortured by the known. How tragic. Yes soul partners indeed! Separated by a vast divide. I pray love always walks by your side. Bill
Strange and beautiful... I wonder what she's thinking.
Great poem Linda...many of us have experienced the landscape you described.
Dear Linda I still have Goosebumps all over... Ai, for just a few moments I shared all these emotions. Regards Donkerman
WELL~ they keep getting better,i gotta try critiquing all that i read A+ & SUPER good and wish i'd wrote this one also,& thats my highest compliment L&P
I like the hope that you are left with after reading this .... I have a couple of from the darkness true light appears type poems... they can be something to write sometimes.... this one is short but to the point... and with a little in your face feel to it...
WOW~ what a painting you painted with this one,& it get my highest compliment (DAMMM Wish i'd done it !) A+ baby and you do shock & amaze me L&P
well, i sure do like this and i really can't explain why, it just sounds as if the naked woman feels exposed and all she feels is blackness....i really liked it...good job! stepf
excellent.... loved it