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38 Days
This rain of time will come
Ripple, little puddle, ripple
This has yet tallied to sum
Rising mass breaches chasm
Rumble, young pebble, rumble
Rising has yet reared to fathom
A ring waits in a bell
A stand waits to be stood
Pebbles and puddles rebel
Very clever construction,
Very clever construction, with a musical "beat" and enjoyable flow that captures the movement of water.
Love Those R's
Consonance, aliteration with consonants. Love it. Trips off the tongue nicely. A most complete poem. - slc