your back

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love

i felt the blood ooze through the holes

but i didn't feel a thing

the tears were rushing down my cheeks  

as fast as speed could be

and you were yelling dirty words

but i couldn't feel the pain

your voice was drifting off somewhere

somewhere ... away from me

i burried your stupid ugly face

somewhere far from me

I was not listening to you

intead I packed  my stuff

my feelings  were hiding inside

so that you would never find them

and my heart was locked away somewhere

and where?  you never new

i threw you out of my life

but somehow..... somehow

you've jumped back in

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wow, i reeally like that poem. You did a really good job writing it. it is really obvious that you are talented......you must have been going through lotsa pain. Well i really like this poem the structure is really good and it has a realy good hook to it. GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!