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Think of me
When u'r scared and u feel alone in this world
Think of me
When u'r problems are so big and u'r solutions are to small
think of me
when u'r confused and u feel overwhealmed
think of me
when u start crying because u'r confused and forgetting everything
think of me
when u are lying on the floor, approching death rapidly
think of me and i'll think of you.
hey...this is a sweet one, but it's kinda sad too.
Hey it's me again. I'll try to keep this one short. I like this poem it's so far probably my second fav.it's simple, has some opposites (big problems, small solutions),and a great ending line. Critique(not that this is a must): I like the poem just the way it is but i really like the opposites thing so i would like to see this poem written all in opposites (ex. think you know it all but so confused)like all the lines before "think of me" would be opposites. but it's really fine the way it is. also i like how you repeat "think of me". The more of your poems i read the more i like them because you freewrite your poems but there is something about each that makes them unique and intriging and sometimes mysterious. I like that variety. I can tell that you probably write your poems down without lots of thought it just comes to you... like a true poet. (ok i have to stop this is turning more into a cheesefest (cheesy) then anything else) but it is all very good. I love it! last question: Who is "me" in this poem? *physical education sux, i'm sure you'd agree that english is much better*
Hey it's me again. I'll try to keep this one short. I like this poem it's so far probably my second fav.it's simple, has some opposites (big problems, small solutions),and a great ending line. Critique(not that this is a must): I like the poem just the way it is but i really like the opposites thing so i would like to see this poem written all in opposites (ex. think you know it all but so confused)like all the lines before "think of me" would be opposites. but it's really fine the way it is. also i like how you repeat "think of me". The more of your poems i read the more i like them because you freewrite your poems but there is something about each that makes them unique and intriging and sometimes mysterious. I like that variety. I can tell that you probably write your poems down without lots of thought it just comes to you... like a true poet. (ok i have to stop this is turning more into a cheesefest (cheesy) then anything else) but it is all very good. I love it! last question: Who is "me" in this poem? *physical education sux, i'm sure you'd agree that english is much better*
Hey it's me again. I'll try to keep this one short. I like this poem it's so far probably my second fav.it's simple, has some opposites (big problems, small solutions),and a great ending line. Critique(not that this is a must): I like the poem just the way it is but i really like the opposites thing so i would like to see this poem written all in opposites (ex. think you know it all but so confused)like all the lines before "think of me" would be opposites. but it's really fine the way it is. also i like how you repeat "think of me". The more of your poems i read the more i like them because you freewrite your poems but there is something about each that makes them unique and intriging and sometimes mysterious. I like that variety. I can tell that you probably write your poems down without lots of thought it just comes to you... like a true poet. (ok i have to stop this is turning more into a cheesefest (cheesy) then anything else) but it is all very good. I love it! last question: Who is "me" in this poem? *physical education sux, i'm sure you'd agree that english is much better*
This iz my favorite poem of urz so far..I like tha way it lets ppl know sumone carez even if they feel that noone carez at all. Great Job!!