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                    I saw you pass by

                   i could not wait to

           look into your beautiful brown eyes



                  the sky grew dark outside

               as you strolled  on by my ride



    a misty rain flew & covered the both of cooling the



  both of us as we shared a sweet & tender kiss on the lips







             I was handcuffed & booked to make



            you all mine until the end of time  .



    

               * This poem is all mine *    

                    

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is a love story
that i had a little
twist about it just
for the fun of it :*) .

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:58am
©13 February 2005 - 11:46pm — poetvg
14 October 2005 - 5:05am — J R (not verified)
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Very sweet and pretty poem :)

16 February 2005 - 8:58am — Sean Liu (not verified)
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Hey, thanks for your comment on my poem "flawless rose". Anyhow, I think this was really good. I really really liked it. Haha, picturing the scene in my head now.

Sean.