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* I Miss You, :*( *
I really do miss you
oh so very much i sit
up at some nights .
asking you to take
all of my pain away
because i begged u not to
go and now i am destined
to spend the rest of my
life all alone onto my own .
without you not here there
is no hope, how can i cope ,
my life is so very incomplete
with out you not here with me .
I lost my speacil one
into a car wreck that
i could never ever change
i felt my spirit visit there
when u did not return my call
for i just sensed it into the cold air
that there was something wrong, then
when you whispered into my ears and
said babe i will always be for you
then a light shined down upon you
from the beautiful blue skies as
i disappeared into the distance with
a river of tears pouring down from my face .
* this poem is all mine *
Truly heartfelt and beautiful...you pen your tears wonderfully...Hugs Raine
hey i love dis poem i have been goin thru da same thing. keep it up n thnk foe da critigues on my site much love pce
This is very well written..I can almost feel your pain when I read it.
i like your line structure and wish i could write something as emotional as that it was brilliant.
x
This poem is touching and your words would make an excelent ballad.