* Hawaii*

                 There was beautiful butterfly

                 In hawaii. i couldnt keep my

                 brown eyes off of , it colors

                 were purple,pink,blue,and orange.

                 it was muliticolored and so care

                 free, it danced from flower to

                 flower among the hawaii shores.

                 it is one of gods gorgeous creatures

                 so forever and full of true beauty.

                

                

            * this poem is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I love this poem because
when i wrote it i was
thinking about a cool vacation with my family .
and freinds and the love
of my life summertime fun
cool refreshing drinks
,with a lemon .iced :*)
tea . dancing on the soft
beach my feet in the sand
the cool breezes in my soft hair its relaxing and so neat im in paradise when im with you
my speacil prince :*D .
ciao for now everybody .

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Katie's picture

So envious I am of the butterfly...

raila's picture

This is a beautiful poem. It painted a wonderful picture of a place I am going to definitely visit one day!


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