Haiku Water Fall

Crisp, cool clean water

runs over tropical green

land, quenching her thirst.

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poetvg's picture

this haiku
is the best
that i have
ever read .

Karyn Indursky's picture

Your second line is off one syllable. Make "runs" running. Other than that, I loved this piece. There's nothing like quite nature to being out beauty surrounding us.

Corey Fox's picture

very good, and You kept it 5,7,5 - one love Corey & co