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When ever you go away
When ever you go away
I feel the pain driving me more and more insane
My heart bleeds just for your touch
My love goes where ever you go
Where ever you may be
I'll be standing there with an open heart
Tears of pain, Tears of rage
I wonder if you'll come back to me
Reading your letters, the... hurt... I just turn the page
To set my painful emotions free
Where ever you you go away
When ever you go away
I would have always been your fiance`
Nice Ash... 'Specially reading old love letters.. I guess that's really the part that grabbed me. I know what it's like, feeling like crawling into a corner and reliving the past.. wondering if it'll come back... heh, waiting for it to be the way things were.. Feeling heartbroken, so angry at and lonely for the person who hurt you. Your poem was very direct, and still moving %) Still, maybe if you moved the "I just turn the page" down one line it might have more of an effect *shrugs* this is supposed to be a critique right? ;)
This is an incredible poem. I know how you feel. People say they care about you, and you start to believe it, and then they leave you without a second thought. I hate it when people do that.