Hawaiian Sonnet

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Hawaiian Sonnet

Karyn Indursky

 

Shall I compare thee voice to musical cord?

Thou voice is more like a soprano singer

talented enough to make thy record

knowing how to make your sweet notes linger.

 

My feet go a tap, tap, tap to each beat

dancing to your belly-dancer story

while your chorus sings off lyrical sheets

and harmony sets the stage with glory.

 

Thy audience demands an encore now.

Thou talent is cherished and demanded.

An elegant performance deserves bows.

Love for Hawaiian song and dance expanded.

 

So long as voices and dancing allure

fans will continue to return for more.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by Ms. Dove.

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nightlight1220's picture

This is sometimes what

This is sometimes what entertainers abhor the most. No doubt, a negative part of the accomplishment. (demands from fans and producers..lawyers, etc.) The flow is nice and steady with this peice.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Poetic_Eyes's picture

thanks

thanks for the feedback nightlight