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Rain
Rain hits the window
In the silence of the room
It beats against you
Like the heart beats against the chest
The lonliness the night brings
Catches you unwillingly
Keeps hold and never lets go.
Rain hits the window
In the silence of the room
It beats against you
Like the heart beats against the chest
The lonliness the night brings
Catches you unwillingly
Keeps hold and never lets go.
Rain Beats
Can hear the rain on the window - nice images and utter loneliness - quite ~ Allets
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That was what I was aiming
That was what I was aiming for in the poem and am glad it was portrayed that way through my writing.
Thank you for the feedback. :)