Whispers in the Rain

Alone I sit in the dark
watching the rain roll down the trees
watching the water streams down the window
no sound except the pitter patter of droplets

I see your face but with no memory of a name
I hear your voice but with no sound to know
a simple whisper of a promise echoes in my mind
a slight touch on my shoulder that I should know

But the whispers of this memory I have long held
escape my mind and slip away
The rain is heavier as the night grows
The silence of the room comforts me

The hand I felt at one time felt real
like an event, but quickly vanishes
Another whisper of a promise but fades
Tears roll down my emotionless face

It hurts, it hurts so much. This thought.
This memory of a man I don't know
This reminder of a promise hurts
The warm palm that lay on my shoulder is gone

I'm left with the cold and bitterness
I see your face again, but I am alone.
Your promise I remember
No, my promise I remember

To not do what you fear
To remember who I am
To forget the hatred in my heart
But i lied, I lied and

I killed you.

my love.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Not sure what caused me to write this. As you can see it's been way too long since I lost wrote any poems. Hope it's as enjoyable as my other poems.

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a.griffiths57's picture

    just loved and enjoyed

 

 

just loved and enjoyed your whispers in the rain poem. So much hurt and distress intertwined in your choice of words, realy great. An interesting read.


 

 

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Elfy's picture

Wow. So much emotion and

Wow. So much emotion and feelings all trapped inside your poem. The words are beautifully placed. I loved this. :) keep writing.


-Elfy*

playbunny's picture

Thank you

Thank you very much. I guess I haven't lost my talent yet lol. I hope to write more, keep checking back :)


Hollie C. Barringer

Elfy's picture

Your very welcome. Lol no you

Your very welcome. Lol no you haven't lost it, and I dout you will. :) I'll do that. Feel free to check out some of my own.


-Elfy*