The Golden Threshold To Every Welcoming Home

Hours of playtime mapped out in chalk

Stretching the length of a city block

The rising of the moon a suitable clock

Reflects in the fountain to which they flock

A row of brownstones which shape the skyline

Each with enigmatic attics and antique shrines

Once I charged through each yard without regard

While light passed through stained glass as leaves lay charred

Assessing the delicate contents of a robin's nest

In a mammoth woolly sweater pulled from a hope chest

Street lamps look like constellations from high on this hill

Not enough hours to indulge in each sensual thrill

All will be tamed as each one is claimed

Gratefully not one was seriously maimed

Chairs scrape linoleum as dinners simmer

These neglected recollections grow steadily dimmer

The click of advancing View-Master slides

Then off to bed before I even hit my stride

With permission slips to class field trips

That world now seems in full eclipse

With beachside arcades and costume parades

And lunches that were always homemade

Seldom infirm with dreadful and insidious germs

In the safe surroundings of someone else's terms

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It wasn't until I had finished it and read it back aloud to myself that I realized I had penned an ode to parental boundaries. My intention however was to write an ode to the wonderfully low-tech 1970s within which I spent most of my childhood.

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Ha ha i felt both! At the

Ha ha i felt both! At the same time! Wonderful as alwaus and spectacular rhymes! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you very very much,

Thank you very very much, SSmoothie. :)

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Someone Else's Terms

I heard that. It is how we are surrounded and secure while growing. Once mature, we throw it off and declare our terms. Nice write. I loved the linoleum chair scratching (a 1930's & 1950's image). Back in the day! :D


 

 

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Thank you, Allets. :)

Thank you, Allets. :)