Love suicide

Is the smirk in your smile
The fear in your eye
The cut of your touch
That makes me want to die
Is it the compelling words of your voice
The simple breath that you take
The violent act of your ways
That make my heart want to break
Is it the ambitious way that you walk
The way that you hold my world
The shallowness of your character
That makes my heart your control
Is it the indigence of your commitment
The way that you lied
The coldness of your heart
That makes loving you suicide

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I enjoyed this one, reads

I enjoyed this one, reads well and flows nicely ...But truly if she/he is like this than maybe it is Love suicide .....

you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......