Beginnings at the End of Day

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With profound majesty
dusk turns to night,
ends absolutely this blaze
of lucid dreams,
slow dance of toil,

festival of pain and glory
we named life.

 

Your labors were your
masterpiece,
seen by most as just
survival, but
to the lives they sustained
they were Life.

 

I could not climb
into your heart and
decode the pain
that tangled my small
definition of love,

 

but love you did

and the world was better
for it.

 

Forgive my judgment
and rest now
in ways I cannot fathom
on this side of
the darkened glass
as something tells me
--and I have no doubt—

that somewhere in forever
a life has just
begun.

 

Patricia Joan Jones

Author's Notes/Comments: 

In memory of my father in law.

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allets's picture

I Hear Him In Your Poem

He must have been a remarkable human this side of "the darkened glass." ~S~
 


 

 

patriciajj's picture

Yes, he was. Thank you kindly

Yes, he was. Thank you kindly for your understanding comment. 

Morningglory's picture

Amazing!

You are a truly beautiful poet, Patricia. Thank you so much for continuing to share your heart with us. 


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patriciajj's picture

Thank you for your very

Thank you for your very moving and encouraging comment. It meant so much to me. 

S74rw4rd's picture

This is a beautiful elegy, so

This is a beautiful elegy, so full of hope and comfort.  Especially at this time, it really reaches me.


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Thank you for that uplifting

Thank you for that uplifting feedback.