you should have seen
how I fell on the ground
so hasty, i tripped off
my stupid feet
two rings were enough;
I know ‘twas you on
the other end my love
don’t want
to keep you waiting
don’t want
to spoil this chance
to hear your voice
and to know how you are
only greetings were
all that we had
two minutes of
bittersweet hello and hi
how time ticked away
I’ll be waiting again
for your next call
though a few extra minutes
will not sooth me
but it’s okay,
enough that I know
you are safe and okay
written 01/11/2003
Great piece - pure and simple
on the mind and on the heart.
Keep Writing like this great form