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I DREAMED OF A CASTLE

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I dreamed of a castle

Huge and wide

With armored guards

Surrounding it by

In front of it is a paradise

Breath-taking greeneries

Stinging deeply inside

I treaded around

On this carnal occasion

Almost unwilling

To have so many blinking

And then all of a sudden

A call was echoing

A maddening voice

Becoming determined

When I opened my eyes

It was then that I realized

It was already past nine

Time for me to get a kick

Off this annoying certainty

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©14 April 2002 - 3:44am — pangan_l_l
16 November 2002 - 11:47pm — Patricia Jones (not verified)
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Beautifully-crafted work; loved how you captured the experience of being cruelly wrenched from a glittering dream into stark reality.

13 June 2002 - 9:40am — Mike G Gaines (not verified)
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you dont know when you had this dream cos i have had it too maybe we meet in it who knows :) keep gping with tha work