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I WISH I'M A FISH
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2001 Poetry I've seen so much on the land
Mountains thin on top
Wilted shrubberies, grimy milieu
Everywhere is sullied
What's in the depth?
What's underneath my feet?
I wanna snatch a moment
To know the wonders below me
I want to go under the surface
Be submerged into unfathomable
To frolic my eyes
To the wonders of the underworld
Vast aquarium where I am en suite
Floating hues of various living forms
With all their styles of reels and twirls
That captures my breath all throughout
I want to be a fish, even for a day
To see all the kinds of corals and reefs
Their wet vegetation and their subsistence
To live through a lifetime of just one moment
I wish I were a fish where chill is never to feel
Whether huge or small that can traverse without a toll
And after sometime, after seeing and mingling
I'll leap right in a net where I could suffice Human's being
i don't like this one. again, good content, but what's the difference between poetry and just talking. which kinda pisses me off, because you have good content, just no flow.
no flow woman, NO FLOW. i don't write poetry, i can't write poetry, but you have a lot of promise, but just no flow
*sigh*
Dear Lolit, It seems to me when we want to be fishes we want to be reunited to GOD Thank you so much for sharing
Nicely penned. ^_^