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Train Hopping Hobos
Train hopping hobos
maybe los lobos
maybe eat ho hos
do they still exist
can I resist
going there
anywhere
anytime
anyplace
just away
far away
come what may
seek adventure
not indenture
is that a word
how absurd
meaning don't wanna be a slave be free
to be just plain old I mean young I mean ageless me
read more of my poetry
come see
what I mean
or try to say
today
so much to choose from
guarantee none is hum drum
put me to the test
give me your best
comment/critique
realize I am unique
I am hungry for insight
if you get what I say please write
thanks for your time
hope you appreciate my rhyme
I've gong read your poem! "Maybe eat ho-hos" is my favorite line. I've read about a handful of poems so far but seems like you write very quickly and concisely. Seems like you just let the poem run from beginning to end instead of trying to fine tune every single word along the way (which I think is good, it's the best way to write). Nice! Anyway, is that how you did it? Just let it rip from beginning to finish?
Interesting poem.
a good poem pam,no more hobos on trains cause trains dont cross country any more...but hobos still exist
now there homeless people how u doin you sound down
ron parrish