LEADING FIRST WITH MY PEN

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JOURNAL # 41
sitting amid my thoughts
so to contribute my verse
though impartiality remains
ever staunch
clever I attempt to make
my approach
words like train sets
can be set up in all
different sorts of ways
the magic is in the construction
itself
like variation in a well written play 
the flow must be meaningful
and transparent
the intent pure in it's delivery
references clean and
only just so carefully obstructed
so to better move the story line
through its labyrinth of paces
branches they all become
you see
leading away from fury
the might of internal conflict
all battle stations for suspicions
and all their subsequent bouts of worry.....
(Feb. 13, 2014 648pm)
 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

I know I could be quite wrong here but I feel like this poem has a lot to say.............

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Yes, indeed, it does have a

Yes, indeed, it does have a lot to say. I read it three times. :)


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I realized not long ago that there were many critiques..........

that I never gave my sincere thanks to and yours was one of them so thank you so much for your many kind words. You have been nothing but kind to me. Sincerely, Melissa