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MY HEART WILL NEVER FORGET

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with so many tangles now

tearing at our lives

know that

'My Heart Will Never Forget'

the richness and grace

that your innermost tender

emotions in me wrought

I am sky without horizon

ocean without tide

meadow without grassland

for without my you

there is no real me

anymore..................

(Dec. 3, 2013 150 am)

 

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For he whom my heart continuously beats for............

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©3 December 2013 - 6:54am — palewingedpoetess
3 December 2013 - 7:31am — Dadio
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A sincerel, meditative, well

A sincerel, meditative, well scribed poem.

3 December 2013 - 7:01am — pbenarumairaj
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I like the similies in your write.

"I am sky without horizon;

Ocean without tide;

Meadows without grassland".

Great!

Ben

3 December 2013 - 7:00am — bishu
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Truly passionate write Respected palewingpoetess

Truly passionate write Respected palewingpoetess

©bishu 

 

3 December 2013 - 2:58pm — palewingedpoetess
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Thank you all............

The heart does try to express itself most honestly..........M.