ODE TO MY POETIC CRUSH

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JOURNAL # 41

mentally speaking
he is
a gentleman of tall demeanor
a 20/20 visionary
looking across the plain of
optimism
a warrior with the words
his calculations of life
are the benchmark of his truth
he is charm with all the trappings
of its magnetic appeal
humility he owns in far greater
shares than most
a millionaire of emotional wealth
he regularly reveals
no bonfire of vanities
does he tote so to trade
if one looks longest at him
with just their inside eyes
all the world would wallow too
in their own poetic crush
and a heartthrob to the deepest of the deep
he would all too soon become
so look out the likes of George Clooney
for at his level
you would be a pickle vying to compete
with a luscious plumb..............
(Sept. 5, 2013 920pm)

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

for my latest poetic crush............ though more harmless than wheat germ I am still is always nice to be so word minded and inspired!

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SSmoothie's picture

love  this turn of phrase in

love  this turn of phrase in particular: 

 

"humility he owns in far greater
shares than most
a millionaire of emotional wealth"


great term poetic crush! :) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

palewingedpoetess's picture

Thanks Ssmoothie,

It's sweet of you to comment. I thought the poem was appropriate as it is just a poetic crush. I'd probably want to pluck out his chest hairs with rusty tweezers in real life.Glad you liked it I was thus so inspired. I'm an easily inspired gal. what else can I say..............Sincerely, M.

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Lol! 

Lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am