QUITE CONCEPTUALLY MINE

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JOURNAL # 41

real love is
a grand voyage
not mere declarations
writ in the sky
for the world to make 
master less notes of
anticipation
is such vessel's ship
compatibility fully embodies
such oceanic waters
upon which various sailing
is done
schools of flagrant fish
interweave their unwanted fins
among even the most championed
of schooners
the intensity is a pure blood's breath
there can be no further imposters
The One always knows to me
just who he is
the other half of my sky
alas so very brightly and
obviously lit
in even places that exist outside
the constraints of time
ever there he sits
mine
heart, mind and tip
others may claim a punch hole or two
in my rough and tumble heart
but it is petals of this bravest he
that allows not my garden to
grow weathered nor dim
for beauty herself takes on
new dimensions
bathed as she is
in the presence of his attentions.......
(July 14, 2013 1237am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written for a wondrous male creature and that is all I'll say.........(laughs deliciously)

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What an ode to your loved one

What an ode to your loved one pwess Madam !!!!!! He'll trip and fall !!! The words are so high and strong. I loved this one very much Madam.


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Why thank you so much sir!

Why thank you so much sir! you honor me with such complimentary comments. Sincerely, M....