A NOTATION OF EXQUISITE ENTRANCE

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JOURNAL # 41

insurmountable fog
your eyes
two gray points
in the dreary mist
sand pages left to slog
oceanic tears
drowning in drifts
the appearance of you
in my life
a perpetual ebb and flow
of interrupted bliss
focal point to my every preoccupation
terry no more
to my dismal door's step
the clamber for some intangible more
marries frenzy to mundane events
for now everywhere in my world
you thrive to exist..............
(Jan 10, 2013 108am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Thinking about some particular someone who has been special to me for the last few years.

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WOW!

Wow! The way you have described your feelings fo the special guy here...what makes you even doubt that he can forget you? Keep the flame, let it burn....:)


Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

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-Laughing now...........

I truly have no idea who I wrote this for. Some friend who cheered me up some long ago evening when I was feeling so down likely. I tend to as you know put people up on undeserved pedastels. What can I say other than it's part of my charm/curse for being me. winks.......You're a gem Sir Poet for admiring such a squirmy little fish of a woman .......Sincerely, Melissa