THE SNAP SHOT

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JOURNAL # 41

movement speaks to me
with words
a limited language
the spirit tools
via the senses
to bring conversation
into the realm of feeling
the senses are buzzing
breath holds hands with
love
you breath out I breath you in
unrest further whispers calm
illusions spark frenzy
in so much lowly fear
the knowing is glorious
no matter what 'The Snap Shot'
appears to be saying
we the children
are alright.......................
(Sept. 13, 2012 724pm)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

proof that hate can so easily be stirred up. Have been contemplating all that blow up over some hate mongering flake that has incited angry crowds to kill innocent people and vandalize and scare others at other embassies. This makes me recall two things. First my mother telling me 'sticks and stones may break my bones but names will never hurt me!' and second it calls to mind a few years prior when author Dan Brown wrote The Davinci Code, similar hatred rose though perhaps not quite so violently. As if Muhammad and Jesus need we every day believers to fight their battles for them. Nothing changes Muhammad is still the so beloved Prophet he always was to people of the Islamic faith and Jesus is still the Prince of Peace the Christians have always believed him to be. Don't fall for the ruse of the hate mongers. Let your large love filled souls rise to their full height in your lowly minded fallible human bodies and see hatred for what it is. A tool of evil created to conquer and divide truly good men from those who would do ill to their own mothers to cause harm to others who do not fall in line with their own force fed narrow plans. Such reprisals do not worry me for those who do catastrophic harm in the end only do the worst damage to their very own souls. Those they, terrorize, maim or kill only rise higher to their final reward, surpassing those who's agenda is only to create chaos and or destroy. God does not wish angry men to incite violence, destroy property and murder countless other souls he loves but due to God's boundless mercy and fairness, even those who would destroy and promote mindless violence are allowed too their own free will but I must say in my closing I pray that God has some mercy on their souls and he shows them with his loving light the darkness and self destruction of their heartless deeds.

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Well done Melissa!

Well done Melissa! I thank you for this poem and the comments from the depths of my heart.


Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

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you are quite welcome..........

I just spoke honestly from my innermot being on the matter.......... Can you tell, I'm going back through all my poems and any that have one comment after them I am replying to as I feel I've been rude many times not thanking the person for their critique. This could take me a while. smiles....... Sincerely, M.