WARRIOR IN LOVE

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JOURNAL # 41

how truly magnificent
he is
this warrior in love
no finer path could
any other man
contemplate to give
petals offered over
prior weeds of poison ivy
by even the vaguest
comparison
from others gloved
miraculous what words can
achieve
history, foundation, contrast ,
and example
bound with closeness and beauty's
own trembling tenderness
what was pleasant and tame once
now grows wild and free
the expansion he has brought to
my world is indescribable
no tomorrow can I ever envision again
without the inclusion of his handsome loving face............
(Sept 7, 2012 226am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

was contemplating those trembling expressions of love that are ever upon the mind...............and this is one of the pervasive ones at present.

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yeah, where are these

yeah, where are these warriors of love hiding?? ;) I love this write! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I think they hide out back behind the garage.......

and I'm just too scared to go out there! laughs........ Sorry for my longgggg delay in replying to your comments but I  have decided to amend this flaw of my character in the coming weeks and go back and reply to every post starting first with the comment listed as just one.  I hope you are well and writing furiously and fabulously dear Smoothie........... Sincerely, Melissa