THE DEFIANCE OF GRAVITY'S PULL

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JOURNAL # 41

words move the spirit
love envelopes the heart
ah but actions steer the vessel
I am swept up as I am taken
to new heights
in 'The Defiance of Gravity's Pull'
somersaults of sensation
strike me immobile
all this
just as I ponder upon
the immortal essence
that constructs
this incarnation of you
leaving me once again
so fabulously floored...............
(March 17, 2012 148am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

writ for someone who is the mirror image (almost) to my very own disposition.

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SSmoothie's picture

this is beautiful,

Congrats on such a great write thoroughly enjoyed this. Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

palewingedpoetess's picture

Thanks Smooth .........

you are a remarkably good encourager........and poet as well...... I enjoy the up beat comments you give as well as the depth you subscribe to in your own poetry. You are someone worth knowing and reading........ Sincerely, M......

SSmoothie's picture

Ditto Mel,

I really enjoy your works I try to read as much as I can of everyones though this is an impossible feat! however, the affective ones should be aknowleged for thier merits so always a pleasure to be impressed the least we can do is let poets know. HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."