SUNSET SUPER GIRL

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JOURNAL # 41

the star shine sang softly
serenading the moon's
milky white rays
fledgling meteors
skipped through the night sky
streaking off on their own
private forays
yet there she sat
'Sunset Super Girl'
giddily draping
the horizon
with her eloquent orange haze
quietly enchanting any eye
that cared enough not to look away............
(Jan 14, 2012 114am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I heard Donovan's song 'Sunshine Super Man' and this title Sunset Super Girl came to me. The body of it followed some hours later. It's not bad. Enjoy........

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Lovely! :) just what I was in

Lovely! :) just what I was in the mood for! Thanks SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

palewingedpoetess's picture

you are belatedly most welcome!

laughs............M.