A PETAL TRACING TEARS

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JOURNAL # 41

a sturdy line of rhyme
I came to see
disappointed nay
never with thee
you penned your
tribute to love so fine
and made a believer
even
out of the likes
of me
such marvel rivals
that beauteous term sublime
glorious cadence
so dappling
why, you put
a delicate gem
on the very finger of love
itself
with which you made
leaving a few hard eyes
a bit wet this very day I bet
who but you could make
even wolves themselves yelp
such poignancy
is the utter epitome of poetry
enchantment itself dreams of
I never knew such feelings
of pride
until I had the great blessing
to know you
I revere the man you store so
safely hidden deep inside
of your rough courageous exterior
tonight I find I am but
'A Petal Tracing Tears'
a veil of the finest linen
I offer in gratitude
so to drape about your
steady solid shoulders
to clothe you in a rarity of care
throughout the rest of your
remaining years
you the poet
but also the man
ah but to one
particular one
you're but her
silly, silly bear.................
(Oct. 7, 2011 118am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written with the ink of admiration..................

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Vixen's picture

Wonderful! Your silly bear

Wonderful!

Your silly bear must be very very special indeed to have made the delicate flower I know as Melissa, a petal tracing tears...
I've been away for days and happy to see you ever inspired my poetess friend... He is one lucky man to have noticed such a lovely bloom as you :)

Yessss girl! Cheers! :)


Shye

“ Let the beauty of what you love be what you do."
                                                   ~ Rumi

palewingedpoetess's picture

Ya know, I plan to reply to your every comment..........

even if you never receive them I think your spirit shall.............your friend, Melissa