POET CAKE *

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JOURNAL # 41

gorgeous words
from a gorgeous man
so beautiful a mind
could the body
really ever even hope
to compete and or understand
when mentally
you never fail to capture me
in non man/woman ways
but just when I fall back into
old habits
of thinking, as a man you are
so amazingly great
I think well
the icing is pretty nice, sure
but I simply adore your cake
for my own depth seeks
true depth
as your own
wondering emptiness
for years stood near
a cliff
at the edge of love's empty lake
you aimlessly paced
ever searching
you then read a poem
in your email from me
and subsequently began
your own heart's form
of love's mad chase
the signs for you gathered
in the wind
and to this very day
things have never been
quite the same
as we are unique parts to
God's note worthy plan
two stage less actors
lunging on a whim....................
(Aug 28, 2011 1038pm)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written for the man who has captured my enchantment and made it his own............

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toobuena's picture

This is wonderful...I love

This is wonderful...I love your choice of analogy of cake...just love this one!

palewingedpoetess's picture

I read all your poems too and loved them........

I'm a shadow compared to your talent. I just wish you would share more...... Sincerely, Melissa