I heard him say
come, let me hold your troubled heart
although no actual words came
still I heard the gloriousness of his voice
the one that never really spoke
all the same
my voiceful soul replied
and I was one with the word.............
(written July 30,2006 1030am)


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An excellent poem!!! Just do voiceful instead of voice full[in the sense of vocal]
I liked the poem very much!!!

Dr S T Wali
Pediatrician/Pediatric HIV Specialist
New Delhi-110001

palewingedpoetess's picture

Thanks for pointing that out to me.

I changed it. I have trouble with small things like that all the time. My current one I am finding is I wrote can not many times in lots of poems of mine and I was informed that cannot is correct. Oh well, do better when we know better right so now with voiceful I am doing better as well. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen