GOODBYE TO MY BIGGEST MISTAKE

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JOURNAL#2

the love was grand

the night was full

now there are apparently

nor more punches indeed to pull

who had the right to say we were through

not I, nor surely not you

back to back or mouth to mouth

when I walked north you ran south

now, when you look at me

my blood runs cold

remembering our stormy past

disgruntled

old and yet completely told

(written Sept.12,1990)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ah how dramatic my young young self sounds! sigh, I should have been a stage actor!

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Afzal Shauq's picture

wow melissa sweetie... its very realistic and heart catchy .. good to say good bye to mistakes..thats why, you are making your personality perfect and the perfection will sure come whn you meet your second half too... and and it's around but your sweet eyes are soo weak to see lol...really a good poem and sweet..