A LOVE WORTH NOTATION

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JOURNAL # 41

he professes
such love to me
tirelessly
in my tender most sub quiet
with an almost angelic strength
for the affection
stilled in the awe as I am
I gaze into his steady
all accepting eyes
nary doubting twilight itself
could envy such perfect surprise
so powerfully I feel something stir
a phial of private liquid skirted
perhaps
stored in the closest of all
proximity
to this ribbon of energy
that has always been there
throughout my life
its very moving presence within me
in which he with his particular touch
electrifies
that is the telling turn that comforts
my chaotic mind
convincing my fragile heart to love him
back
as deeply as any soul encased body
is able
he is my symbol/guide to better future
days
my very own uncomprizable love.......
(Aug 16, 2015 751am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written with my heart in my hand...............

 

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emmenay's picture

WRITTEN WITH YOUR HEART IN YOUR HAND?

O poetess, you know that I admire and love your poetry, so no need to discuss more over here. Only one question puzzles my mind: Was it your heart only in your hand when you were writing this or was your whole being into it? I believe you were totally involved when you composed this beautiful love poem. Well done O Poetess Prolifica!


Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

palewingedpoetess's picture

Guilty as charged Sir Poet!

cuff me and take me away to the cell in which I belong. I do love to write myself some lovely love infused love poems. It is meat for the hungry soul. Do be assured. Plus its a glorious day when such words garner a stirred up response from you and no before you think it no I'm not thinking of you as a mere garnish on my poetic plate you are more like a lovely apertiff delicious and potent. Not enough to intoxicate me. winks big...... you know who........... smiles

KindredSpirit's picture

Very good. KS

Very good.

KS

palewingedpoetess's picture

I thank you from the cap of my pen to the tip of my page........

I am but the conduit but I do sincerely thank you for reading my poetic ramblings which to me is the soul's quiet utterances. sincerely, M.