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Awaiting The Immortal Kiss
Things in life are never as they seem
The harder you try to make things right
The More you are wrong and must redeem
The things you’ve lost and given up.
In a moment your whole life will change.
You look at your self and don’t realize the price you have paid
For the sake of others you sold yourself
Look around at the life you have made
The price was your soul and you have nothing to show
Wanting to run with no ware to go.
Awaiting the immortal kiss
Something your sure to miss
Go back and find what you left behind
Or all you will have is the moment of your death
When all that is left is the immortal kiss of the Pine box!!!!
Casper McConkie
4-13-2007
I love this, such an awesome
I love this, such an awesome idea packing a powerful little punch! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you i believe this is
Thank you i believe this is one of my darkest poems lol
To thine own Self Be true
"The more you try to make things right the more you are wrong and must redeem the things you have lost and given up" Words of wisdom indeed ! Loved it.
Love that poem, very real!