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4 Years

4 years with the wool over my eyes

you said the shadow outside the watering hole was us in 60 years 

but the chains began to rust

the deeper we dug

to reveal our true self would be treason

besides the story we live we become

so i guess we all need something to believe in

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©6 September 2013 - 3:12am — November
7 September 2013 - 12:43pm — a.griffiths57
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4 Years:

 

I like your poem particularly the last two lines. Yes something to believe in.

 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

9 September 2013 - 12:56pm — November
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Thank you

Thank you 

6 September 2013 - 5:18am — Keepongoing
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Hi

welcome abord

6 September 2013 - 5:27am — November
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thanks it's a great site some

thanks it's a great site some very good poets on here