Cut me free

oh im losing you

do you feel it too

you don't hold me like you used to do

you don't look at me like i'm the one for you.

 

And you break my heart

With those side ways glances'

So many time i've begged the truth

And given you those chances

to cut me free,

and let my love be'.

But you can't give redemption to me.

 

you say you don't know

But I know you're letting go '

Talking in your sleep

While my lonliness grows-

You say you don't want me to leave

So I pull you close

and you say that you can't breath

 

Please, please,

Give me some relief,

Tell me the truth

Cause' the truth is a release'.

I see the fear in your eye's

When I ask you to be real

Why can't you just give it to me

And give all my life back to me.

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tallsquirrelgirl's picture

Love this!

"But you can't give redemption to me" I know a lot of people have lived this and you wrote it so well...thank you!


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

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Yearning To Be Close

and not finding it is hard when the one you love pulls away. your open prese style is evolving into something wonderful. - allets -