Door

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closet boxes 2003

Does nothing take your breath away

or make you shed a tear

does everything confuddle

are you lost within your fear.



When your life has no real meaning

will you sit there all alone

a prisoner in your fortress

nowhere to call a home.



Don't look for happy endings

another door slams in your face

but your to lost for caring

it's nothing but a waste.



Does nothing make you happy

will you ever have a clue

the things that you will never know

what was in front of you.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

When will people start seeing whats right in front of them

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Ray's picture

Hey, There's alot of poems that you wrote that even made me think in a good way. I haven't read them all but I will.
Love From
Your Bro
Raymond B.

running_with_rabbits's picture

what if what is right infront of you is not what it seems and only adds to the sorrow. When will people see that there is nothing to make you happy, you just think you are. We are but a dream within a dream

ash


Much Love

Ashley