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Alone Is What You Are
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closet boxes 2002 How much can you fake
before they see all your mistakes
how much further can you go
before they all begin to show
when your life begins to fade
and the decisions that you've made
leave you not knowing what to do
as if you do not have a clue.
Your tied up in yourself
to obsessed in your self-worth
think of this all as a game
don't relize who your causing pain
and at this point don't really care
don't see how your not being fair.
You try so hard but still aren't seen
In the end your only mean
shattered by your hopeless dreams
you have noone on which to lean
you lost the things that made you,you
because the things you said weren't true
you don't even have a home
how does it feel to be alone.
I'd put question mark at the end, it would make the whole piece even more powerfull. but I liked your words anyways. hear ya clearly! ;)
I can relate to this. I have had many people backstab me in the short years I've been around... heh.
good work keep it up!
Ps. Check out my poems and critique
kala
i like the last two lines
but i don't realy like the rest fo the poem
ash
Much Love
Ashley