Anyone



not a Void.

maybe Once

it Was.



but not Now.

because Dust

Resides.



you took All

that you Could

and Leave



my soul full of Dust.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem sucks.

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Megan Sassenrath's picture

this poem most certainly does not suck, adam. do not say such a thing... i don't appreciate you insulting the things i like. this poem makes me sad though... not uplifting at the end like some of your others. and i am going to critique all of your poems first, even with your unfair advantage.