nature of love

Chasing months, we breath in days.

Excited I am in the valley of love,

Deeper than the ocean, core within earth.

For I have loved you long, and will confound you more.

Special you are oh! heart of mine,

From a far away land, you are my honey land.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hello loved ones! I hope you like my poem. Please do correct me when i'm wrong, i am still a learner. Hope you all enjoy it!Smile

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MoonCruxCollision's picture

so cute

love it!

9inety's picture

we are all

learning, and learning love is a lesson well worth the study.

You have a great grasp of the emotion that adds to the academic.

Its not the complexity of words that touch the heart it is more the meaning that is worth all of the reading.

Keep writing

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

Whispers_From_The_Mind's picture

short and sweet is perfect

this is a lovely poem thank you for sharing.

nairat's picture

Thank you

Thank youSmile


Nairat