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*~ My Life, My Poems ~* July 1st, 2004
In all I feel
Nothing seems real
I'm broken from head to toe
Learning nothing as I grow
The feel for pain
Is just a remain
The words that I use
Do nothing but confuse
I hurt because I am sore
I feel as though I should hit the floor
The remains of my life
I'd rather not descife
So why must this pain
Stick and remain
Why do I feel
This shouldnt be real
hmmm like it very much... inspiring a lot...it's very sweet and professionally done this poem with deep idea... yeah I am not wrong if I again say it that you are good poet with new subjects to express... sharing it if you will also like my expression of love based peace thoughts also( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq ) I am sure my this famous say will be satisfying your every worry about the humanity and social life and even friendship...yeah is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..good friend...go on and on...