Insight Outburst:

Insight outburst:
Where i live
In the town of now
The television of visions channelizing freedom on the frequency of a lost war
Here walls wearing the shades of unfaithful oaths of wisemen under confused roof of time
Where i live
In the town of now
The table drawers speculating stories in lampit hiddings
The carpets of sighs , emotions , comfort , pain dripping wet in melancholy of life rain
Where i sit 
I hide in the obvious
In obvious staturation of stillness
Where i live
In the town of now
The blind windows opening to the silent warm streets of blood
We keep our lives intact to relic of situations
The ugly curcifiction of red moon above the unholy slaughter of young
Old piled on the stairs of history
Where i live
In the abyss of town of blood
Sailing thousand wounds of surreal helpless surrender.

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nightlight1220's picture

All three were so much fun to

All three were so much fun to read. This, I think my favorite.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Muin's picture

Thankyou very much.

Thankyou very much.

Morningglory's picture

I'm finding your works

I'm finding your works interesting. By the way the 4th line and 3rd line from the end are difficult to read because they are cutting into the sidebar menu on my browser. Wonder if it shows like that for others. Anyway, you might want to put a line break at the comma. I look forward to reading more of your work!


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Muin's picture

Thankyou.Thats gracious of yo

Thankyou.
Thats gracious of you.

allets's picture

Line Breaks

Yes, I can not read them either and it chops up the continutity. I need the larger print to see best and it looks odd - okay write, what I could see (or Surrealism see Andre Breton) ~~Lady A~~


 

 

Muin's picture

I fixed it , see if it outbou

I fixed it , see if it outbounds your browser again.
Beyond that its the style of my writing.

allets's picture

I See It All Now

Thanks ~allets


 

 

Muin's picture

You are welcome.

You are welcome.