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Oh, I want to save you.

Watching as you hurtle with unbridled abandon through a cloudless sky, wearing a snorkel and blowing bubbles.

I shout a warning and a whipping gale pilfers them away.

Fingers contort to form signs of old, but you shield your eyes from an oblivious sun.

Tears stream down; as I reach to wipe them away, there's nought to touch; I've forgotten my role as a ghost.

I suppose I'll wait until we toil side by side in Tarturus; comeuppance for the sins of our ancestors.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

dunno how to do it.

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I liked the imagery here! It

I liked the imagery here! It just totally resonated with me and the journey and resolution was also excellent and I love the quirkiess 


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thanks smooth. im tryin to

thanks smooth. im tryin to cut back on the decadence in my stuff. glad you dig

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You old ghost, you old muckety muck - aka: ma kinda decadence - triple star, tripple A rating in a world of stars and A's :D ~~A~~